Working with Graham Bartlett

Sun, 18th July 2021

Just too busy, and then….

Let me introduce myself. My name’s Mark Richards. In the day job I’m a freelance copywriter – and when lockdown struck in March last year I immediately lost two clients. ‘Sorry, too much unpredictability.

We need to cut all our costs…’

That was bad news – financially and psychologically. Financially for obvious reasons. Psychologically? Because it took my excuse away.

I’d already written and self-published some books: non-fiction, humorous books about long-distance walks  I’d done with my son. But there was a small voice inside me. It kept whispering ‘write a novel, write a novel.’ Fortunately I kept it at bay. ‘Clients, mate. I don’t have time.’

No Excuses

But then lockdown took care of those clients – and I couldn’t ignore the small voice any longer.

Six months later I published Salt in the Wounds

Michael Brady was a high-flying detective. His wife was killed in a hit-and-run that was meant for him. He goes back to Whitby – his home town – to rebuild his life and be a good dad to his teenage daughter. But then his best friend is murdered…

SOS

Clearly I needed more than my ad-hoc collection, and occasional advice through the Facebook Cops and Writers group

I needed to work with someone long term: find someone who’d come to know and understand me, and know and understand Brady. Essentially, I needed help in three key areas:

I needed to put the foundations in place. Brady needed a believable career path. What exams did he have to pass? How old would he be when he became a Detective Sergeant?

Photo Credit: University of Bradford

Help is at hand Graham had been one of the people who’d replied to my questions in the Cops and Writers group. We exchanged messages through Facebook and gradually developed a working relationship. We found we had something in common. I support Wolves: he supports Brighton. We both understand pain.

I’ve now written two full length Brady booksand two novellas taking him back to the start of his career. Both series will run to eight or ten books and I’ll work with Graham on all of them.

So what do I get from our working relationship?

He understands the importance of small details. Let me give you an example. There’s a scene in the book I’m writing at the moment where Brady needs to interview an inmate in prison. 

Graham had done that, about a year ago. He told me what colour the walls of the interview room would be. That the chairs wouldn’t be screwed down. That the prisoner would be wearing a fluorescent jacket – yes, just like a football sub warming up – so the watching warder could immediately identify him. Finally, he’s easy to talk to. You don’t find yourself thinking, ‘I can’t ask that: he’ll think I’m an idiot.’ So in the last call we had I asked him basic questions about procedure, technical questions about DNA samples and interviewing the prisoner – and one softer question that’s crucial to the plot. ‘Do some people think they are too intelligent/ too important/ too rich to be interviewed by the police?’ The answer to that last question took about ten minutes, and it will inform a key scene in the next Brady book.
That’s it. My job’s simple: finish the next Brady book – The Echo of Bones   for its September 30 deadline. And then write several more.  When lockdown struck I’d have said that was impossible. I didn’t know if I could write a novel, and I knew nothing about police work. Fifteen months on I know I can write a novel – and, thanks to Graham, I can learn everything I’ll ever need to know about police work.  Salt in the Wounds https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B08H8S48YW  The River Runs Deep https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B08ND3W4MD  The Echo of Bones https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B093C66NQD 

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